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Monday, February 8, 2016

Final Thoughts

The three novels that we have read so far in AP English all end with conclusions that have left me unsatisfied. I understand that their endings add to the final development of their themes, yet, none of the endings truly compare to the endings found in Cloud Atlas. In the last pages of each part of the sextet, David Mitchel completes each character’s story with final contributions to key themes.

Sloosha’s Crossin’ An’ Ev’rythin’ After

“I watched the clouds awobbly from the floor o’ that kayak. Souls cross ages like clouds cross skies, an’ tho’ a cloud’s shape nor hue nor size don’t stay the same, it’s a cloud an’ so is a soul. Who can say where the cloud’s blowed from or who the soul’ll be ‘morrow? Only Sonmi the east an’ the west an’ the compass an’ the atlas, yay, only the atlas o’ clouds.” (308)

As I reread each ending it becomes increasingly apparent how they influence the reader’s perception of the novel’s themes. Throughout the first five sections I noticed the comet shaped birthmarks appearing on each main character. Yet, none of the characters acknowledge the concept of reincarnation until Zachary does in this section. As Zachary says a cloud’s shape and hue may vary it’s still a cloud, which allowed me to begin to understand how the central characters in Cloud Atlas share a soul and possess key similarities. One of the most striking illustrations of this concept was when Frobisher begins to refer to himself as “Frobisher the stinker […] and Frobisher the Composer […]” (469) just as Zachary does in his section. Both of their characters struggle to do “the right thing” and continually question their own behavior. Yet, their questioning is not necessarily a negative aspect of their character as it demonstrates their consideration of what is right and wrong.

The Orison of Sonmi-451

“We see a game beyond the endgame […] As Seneca warned Nero: No matter how many of us you kill, you will never kill your successor.” (349)

When the archivist and Sonmi first introduce the fact that her journey was arranged and that declarations are flaunted by Unanimity as evidence for further constriction of the rights of the fabricants, I was greatly dismayed. However, Sonmi’s perspective convinces the reader that there still is hope her declarations could have a positive impact. An idea can truly become a movement when it is spread throughout a society. Regardless of how the declarations are introduced, they are spread all throughout Sonmi’s society, which could have a future impact. Sonmi’s use of Seneca’s warning illustrates how Corpocracy could finally fail. They may kill all the fabricants they desire, yet, they will eventually be succeeded and their successor may fail to carry out their work. Societies can never last forever, as displayed by the presence of Zachary’s story. Mitchell would have us believe they will cycle in an orbit as suggested by the comet shaped birthmark found on every character.

The Ghastly Ordeal of Timothy Cavendish

“Middle age is flown, but it is attitude, not years, that condemns one to the ranks of the Undead, or else proffers salvation. In the domain of the young dwells many an Undead soul. They rush about so, their inner putrefaction is concealed for a few decades, that is all.

Cavendish’s tale truly offers a “ghastly” perspective on the consequences of aging and joining the ranks of the elderly. He fights his forced captivity in the Aurora House and finally achieves escape with two fellow captives. His successful escape appears to suggest that age is not truly a number but rather an attitude. Although Cavendish is not characterized as exceedingly brave or strong, in fact the opposite may be true; he does not have an “Undead soul”. Rather than admitting to the terrifying wrath of Nurse Noakes and company, Cavendish constantly pursues escape even after he suffers a stroke. His dedication in the pursuit of his goal is admirable and is paralleled in other sections such as Luisa Rey’s.

Half Lives: The First Luisa Rey Mystery

Are molecules of Zedelghem Chateau of Robert Frobisher’s hand, dormant in this paper for forty-four years, now swirling in my lungs in my blood? Who is to say?” (436)

I was not as impressed by the story of Luisa Rey. Her determined investigation of the danger of the Swannekke B reactor and the corruption behind its construction and operation was commendable. However, she had to be saved rather often throughout her journey and never successfully outwitted her pursuers alone. The ending to her tale offers a logical transition in the second section of Robert Frobisher’s story and provides further evidence of reincarnation.

Letters from Zedelghem

“Time cannot permeate this sabbatical. We do not stay dead long. Once my Luger lets me go, my birth, next time around, will be upon me in a heartbeat. Thirteen years from now we’ll meet again at Gresham, ten years later I’ll be back in this same room, holding this same gun, composing this same letter, my resolution as perfect as my many headed sextet. Such certainties comfort me at this quiet hour.” (471)

I still puzzle over the ending to Robert Frobisher’s tale. It bothered me how positive a light it paints on his decision to take his life. His certainty that he would return, that the events captured in “Letters from Zedelghem” will continue to occur, aligns with the theme of reincarnation being a cycle. Yet, this does not qualify as proper justification for taking your life. Frobisher idea that life should be spent like a firework, bright and fast, bothers me to a degree. Although I enjoyed how Mitchell illustrates how problems such as discrimination permeate all societies and how people will always fight such problems, I did not understand how this allowed suicide to be acceptable.

The Pacific Journal of Adam Ewing

“If we believe that humanity may transcend tooth  & claw, if we believe divers races creeds can share this world as peaceably as the orphans share their candlenut tree, if we believe leaders must be just, violence muzzled, power accountable & the riches of the Earth & its Oceans shared equitably, such a world will come to pass. I am not deceived. It is the hardest of worlds to make real. Torturous advances won over generations can be lost by a single stroke of a myopic president’s pen or a vainglorious general’s sword.” (508)


The concept of believing in such lofty goals for humanity would have stuck Ewing as pointless at the beginning of his journey; yet, when Autua saves him from the brink of death, Ewing’s perspective greatly changes. He shakes off the prejudicial views held by the despicable men who surround him. Ewing understands that a perfect world with just leaders and equitable sharing of resources is the “hardest of worlds to make real”, but he is not intimidated by this reality. The novel as a whole illustrates why one should have hope for humanity. Each character, possessing the same soul, resists an aspect of their society and fight for what they believe is just. Although their actions could easily be scraped by a single malicious leader as Ewing notes, the book ends on a brighter note. Ewing ends his journal with: “‘& only as you gasp your dying breath shall you understand, your life amounted to no more than one drop in a limitless ocean!' Yet what is any ocean but a multitude of drops” (509), giving the reader hope that each person can have an impact on the world.

Tuesday, February 2, 2016

Quarter 4 (Pages 291-509): Why AP?

The structure of Cloud Atlas truly sets the book apart. At first the shocking leaps forward in time were slightly confusing; however, as the novel concludes, descending in reverse order, it becomes apparent how critical the structure is in developing the characters whose worlds share key similarities. It allows the reader to observe the connections between characters and different time periods as the book progresses from the past into the future. The names of the characters may change but some of their significant qualities the issues they face remain the same. Cloud Atlas's complexity alone makes it an AP worthy text. Throughout all of the different sections Mitchell develops his many recurring themes allowing for the accumulation of enough evidence to write an essay about almost any topic.

The story begins and ends with the diary entries of Adam Ewing an “‘American Notary of Letters & Law’” (477). In my first blogpost I discussed how Ewing appeared to be a hypocrite. Even though he helps Autua, a black stowaway slave, attain a position aboard the prophetess, other actions prove that he truly does not believe in equality. The conclusion to Ewing’s story offers the reader a much different perspective of the man. During his journey Ewing meets a preacher who rants about how the “Highest of all the races on this ladder stands the Anglo-Saxon. The Latins are a rung or two below. Lower still are the Asiatics-a hardworking race, none can deny, yet lacking our Aryan bravery” (487). Ewing struggles to accept such strong discriminatory perspectives and begins to question the whole idea of colonization, pondering the thought that “Maybe the Indians of the Societies & the Chathams would be happiest ‘undiscovered’” (492). These thoughts are encouraged as Ewing observes the destruction of discrimination aboard the Prophetess. One of the younger crewmembers, named Rafeal, is subject to such horrid hazing that he takes his own life. Ewing is struck by the event and the lack of a reaction from the Captain. In the end of the story Ewing teeters on the brink of death, due to a long term poisoning effort by his “friend” Dr. Henry goose. Yet, he is rescued by Autua slave he rescued at the beginning of the story.

Autua’s rescue of Ewing combined with Rafael’s suicide brings Ewing to strong conclusions, which truly summarize key themes from the entire novel. He states “In an individual, selfishness uglifies the soul; for the human species, selfishness is extinction” (508). This thought echoes events from previous sections of the book. Luisa Rey exemplifies the opposite of selfishness as she dedicates everything to her pursuit of the Sixsmith report, which uncovers the wrongdoing of a nuclear power company. Her fight against rampant corruption repeatedly brings her within moments of death; however, she refuse to admit defeat until the danger of the Swannekke B reactor is exposed. Ewing decides he must dedicate himself to the Abolitionist cause “[…] because [he] owe[s his] life to a self-freed slave & because [he] must begin somewhere” (508). Although he imagines his father-in-law responding by saying “‘& only as you gasp your dying breath shall you understand, your life amounted to no more than one drop in a limitless ocean’” (509), Ewing states “Yet what is any ocean but a multitude of drops” (509). This thought makes a connection with Sonmi’s section. As Sonmi reveals to the archivist, she was aware to a degree that her journey had been a set up by Unanimity, but that she wanted to finish her declarations anyways. Regardless of the fact that the declarations are flaunted by Unanimity as reasons to suppress the fabricants, Sonmi understands that the distribution of her declarations could possibly influence future fabricants or purebloods. Her action, her drop, could begin to allow fabricants to realize the inequality that they face.


The complexity of Cloud Atlas requires a reader to dedicate too much time for it to be added directly to the curriculum but it should be strongly suggested as a free choice book for ambitious readers. Although I have now written four blogposts about it, I still feel as if I have just scratched the surface of the themes found throughout the entire book.